Thanks for the feedback. I’m not much of a prose writer and I know it.

this is good! for the lines before though, id suggest doing more showing than telling
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Tamara Pearson
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Feb 8, 2017
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Thanks for the feedback. I’m not much of a prose writer and I know it.
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